You did a great job on your website. Your home page is easy to understand, it's optimized for the search engines and it does exactly what it is supposed to do ... act as a guide to the rest of your website.
The only thing I noticed that I would do differently is to make your clickable map area bigger. You have to click on a very small area of the map to make it work.
I liked your about me page, but I would spiff it up. Your on-line customers want to know more about who you (really) are. They want to like and trust you. Your about me page is good, but it could be much better. The photos of you with your girls is great. I would keep it and add to it. You might want to lift a few ideas from
my page.
I did not see a call to action on your map. What I mean by that is a reason to work with you specifically over any other real estate agent on Maui. I was hoping to find a special report that you could offer me where I would have to give you me name and email address. This would allow you to get my valuable contact information and position yourself as the expert in Maui Real Estate at the same time.
The other thing I would do is add a Wordpress blog to your website and post to it every few days. The reason for having one is to position yourself as the Maui Real Estate expert and to generate organic traffic to your site from the search engines.
I also noticed that you only have 20 external links leading back to your website. If you look at the Hansen's site, Delmore's and Ken Smith's site they have thousands of links leading back to their website. They are focusing on the term, "Maui Real Estate" which is a horrible term to want to place high on the search engines for. (If you're interested in hearing why, I'd be happy to tell you.)
In order to get these very valuable links I would suggest you do some article marketing. You can learn how to do it from our free
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Best wishes with your business Todd. You're off to a very good start. If you pay attention to Internet marketing, you should see hundreds of visitors to your site every week.