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Site Name: Kimberly Schneider.com
URL: http://www.themanifestationmaven.com
Description: As an Abundance and Manifestation Coach, I help professionals, entrepreneurs and other exceptional individuals explore and expand their potential.
Category: Business
Tags: The Secret Abundance Entrepreneur
Site Owner: kschneider (View All of kschneider's Links)


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Old 06-11-2009, 09:28 AM
Lissa Lalonde
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I think that the website is informative and useful. I enjoy reading the information that is available.
It is easy to understand, even though the topic is very complexe.
Keep up the amazing work,
Lissa Lalonde
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Old 06-11-2009, 09:52 AM
Lisa
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I love your website. It's very positive, welcoming, informative. It makes me want to read and learn further to make these changes in my life. It's exciting to think about manifesting abundance and success and happiness!
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Old 06-11-2009, 09:52 AM
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I love your website. It's very positive, welcoming, informative. It makes me want to read and learn further to make these changes in my life. It's exciting to think about manifesting abundance and success and happiness!
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Old 06-11-2009, 09:52 AM
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Hi Kim:

I like the look and feel of the site!! I just have a couple of comments/suggestions.

I noticed that your signature is placed in the top left corner of the home page. That's a nice touch. It does seem to be very thin and I almost missed it. Can it be "bolded"??

The tan/pebbled/textured background for the text area looks very nice, except it tends to compete with your copy. The copy is also tending to get a little "washed out". Maybe a slightly lighter background or a bolder, more distinct type colr would make the text stand out more.

Mary B. does like the dark blue backgrounds doesn't she?? That's what she has used for my site as well.

Overall, very nice!!

Talk to you soon,

Bob Olsen
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Old 06-11-2009, 10:33 AM
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The sand background was distracting or made it seem blurry to me. Especially when the text was in blue and very small.

I did peek around your website and actually found the black print easiest for me to read on the sand background. If it was colored print the larger print was better.

Voice message:

I listened to it and found your voice almost monotone for you. It didn't hold your usual excitement. Don't get me wrong you spoke cleanly, clearly and consisely. But it just seemed dull compare to really hearing you speak.

Actual content?

I realize you have a lot to say but it is wordy!
Why Free? why not I want to "GIFT YOU".

I find your work inspiring, thought provoking and intriguing but all the sales pitches drive me nuts. It lowers the value of the message to me. I could learn this information many other places as you yourself point out. Yes, in a different format and maybe not the way you'd teach it but not with all the sales pitches.

2-4 mailings a month? Random? I guess I'm too ordered and would want specific dates to look forward to for your message. i.e. Manifestation Message Mondays? get my week off to a Manifesting Start? Maybe just receiving them at random would make me enjoy the surprise. Just struck orderly me odd.

All that said, if you couldn't change anything. It is a great respresentation of you, your work and a taste of what one can do!
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Old 06-11-2009, 11:06 AM
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Kimberly,

The overall site works nicely. I agree with Bob Olson's comments about your signature and the tan grained background.

I found two typos. On your Coaching page in the title line " The VIP Day of Transformation. Transformation is missing the "r".

On the last line of, "When Kimberly Schneider is ...That's when

waiting lists are (there is an ae before the are)

I think all else is good.

Sincerely, Kent
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Old 06-11-2009, 12:11 PM
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Hi Kim,
Improvement - You must scroll down to view products. When I first clicked on the products page I thought you didn't have any. I would suggest having the picture of the home study course first with a hyperlink the jumps you to the description below when you hover your mouse over it. Place it where it is seen immediately, then have your "Options" under it with their own hyperlinks to the text below. Keep in mind that you have only a few seconds to grab the viewer’s attention. Avoid long pages, especially without hyperlinks. Also, you have links to outside sites. Are they reciprocating? Do you have some one way links to you? You should!

Look and Feel - I love the setup. Very attractive and relaxing, it makes me want to check it out.

More Value - Value for you: I would suggest hyperlinks between your pages, especially back to the products page, speaking, and anything else that brings you income. Value for readers: "Kimberly Suggests" sending viewer to Amazon. The viewer will grow and be more curious about your message. Not to mention the payback to you from Amazon.
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Old 06-11-2009, 01:10 PM
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i suggest cleaning up the fonts for visual ease for the visitor. Use sanserif in just one text size and headlines can be serif. Don't mix headlines/bolds with different fonts. The red bold serif works really well to pop out. I would consider serif-bolding for all the headlines and putting in red the parts you want to stand out.

The fancy font for your title and menu bar is a little on the edge of readability, though it is pretty -- all the more important to make your text and headline fonts simple.

Hope that helps!
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Old 06-11-2009, 05:55 PM
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Kimberly,

The website doesn't look like a website to me.
It looks like a blog.
The narrow "frame within the frame" setup makes it look
uninviting and too wordy.

Visitors don't want to work more than necessary to receive information. If you require people to scroll down to view the rest of your first page, I think you will lose traffic.

The signature should not touch your cheek. The tan paper with colored font is too hard to read.

Hope this helps!

Simone StClare
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Old 06-12-2009, 03:17 AM
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Hi Kim,

Your site is so rich in wonderful content. However, it is almost too much as in overwhelming. I am of split mind between feeling that less is more and knowing that people do love to read all the wonderful information that you have. I agree with several other site reviewers. I am not fond of the tan textured background. Perhaps a much lighter version in the same color family as your main color. I love the red accents. You and your information and products are wonderful so in the end people will be drawn toward what they need.
Know that your website is evolving perfectly.
Margie
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Old 06-13-2009, 01:46 PM
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HI, I think it looks great. I love the recording and the color scheme. The 'golden type' wasn't golden though. If I was looking at the right thing it was actually purple. I couldn't find anything gold that was a link.
It's amazing of course. I'm signing up!
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